Polishing Words

Today I finish my part of the group report. I had two main objectives on the writing, show the client the benefits of our approach, and make thoughtful comparisons against the client-server solution. By showing the weaknesses, and specially the statement that our proposition is cost efficient, it will give our team competitive advantage. I don’t believe the other group is going to think about this.
On the other hand, it has been quite difficult to squeeze two weeks research, in a short document, plus I tried to focus my writing in showing solutions rather than how much I have researched, but it hasn’t been an easy task.